Ahh.
Finally.
I missed this.
Lol.
I'll take care of your firefly.
That was very emotional for me.
I saw a firefly almost dying.
And this little girl trying to tend it.
It was... weird.
Rungs?
Umm... In the dictionary I found that it
Was like
A past thing for rings.
Do you have the right word?
Third stanza?
Effing mazing.
Giving your heart to a firefly?
AHHH!
That's original bay-beee
I get the poem.
I believe it's actually quite deep.
People worry when you're sad
Some will give their heart to you.
So brighten up that firefly light.
Or something like that.
I love this.
How long did it take you to make?
It seemed like an extremely hard poem.
5/5, dearest :]

This was cute :]
I love La`Tuins, so the double was a bonus for me, haha. I did notice a few things though...

"Sooth your sad heart; do not you dare die," 'sooth' should be 'soothe' , and the other part would flow better if 'do not you' was 'don't you' .

That's all that I caught on to, great job Darling!

5.5
<3