I don't know why I chose to read this but I'm so glad I did. These are my exact feelings currently and they shouldn't be. It's because of insecurities. So I give this a 5/5 for relatability. Good job.
-angela

Wow it was really beautiful and lonely...great job and really i can feel what you want the readers to feel..

Can't force my eyes open
They seem to be sewn shut
I wish this was a movie
So I could scream "Cut!"
`I love that & I can totally relate . When I got torn apart, this was exactly how I felt . You jsut put it into words what I couldn`t explain (:

I think you did a nice job with this , `tho I find the last stanza kind of rocky . But still, well done .
..__MiNDYY