Comments : The lowly ant

  • 16 years ago

    by Lets Keep it A Surprise

    I liked this poem alot. It shows how humanity is so diverse, how even ants can work together more peacefully then us with minds and wills.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. I really liked it because it described how ants work togeather perfectly.
    I also loved the format of the poem it made it easy to read. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Zeus

    OMG I LOVED IT!!! This is a great poem. I loved it greatly. Keep up the work. I loved how you compared it to Communism. Great Work!
    7/5 i wish. lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    Good poem but it could have been a bit better had you had fleshed out the whole lonely ant idea and added some more descriptions or a poetic something to make the lines stand out.

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a very well done poem I enjoy it from first word to the last The aunts would be proud kudos. Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Great work...amazing..just beautiful..i loved the way u've clearly desribed the ant work..lol...the message is soo true..more should think like u do...lol...good wrk=)
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow..i've never seen anyone write a poem about an ant... lol.. im impressed...

    the flow was great and the rhyming...

    theres just one problem that i see...

    "So stomp and spray but when your done"

    ^^in this line "your" should be changed to "you're" ...

    but other than that this is good.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i thought you did such a great job on this, i never thought of an ant like that, i just thought of them as annoying crawlers. but the way you described them was great nice work, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    Ah! An excellent tribute to the ants! I look at those creatures in amazement. This is a lovely write, fluid, unique, smart. A pleasure to read.

    Keep it up!
    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N