Comments : Dear Shona

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Actually.
    This was pretty scary to me.
    Lol.
    I thought about a stalker.
    You stalking the pretty girl.
    Just because... well she's pretty.
    I'm weird, huh?
    All in all,
    The poem was okay.
    I've read better from you.
    I thought it was really
    Interesting that you used
    A different language, though
    That sounds like a name.
    I loved that.
    But still, it's kind of sweet, kind of scary.
    Your topic's kind of cliched.
    Kind of not.
    So my dear,
    I'm going to have to give you a 5/5 :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Hmm, i think ur kind of scary as it has nothing with stalking or anything like that so i dont know where u got that from? u sure u have read the right poem????
    just wondering

  • 16 years ago

    by hani

    I love it , its very nice and beautiful good work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by keshawna

    This is a wonderful poem its really beautiful

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Dear Shona
    From the evening I saw you
    Like a movie theme.
    Since then,
    you became an actress in my every dream.
    `Perfect ending, dear . Absolutely perfect .

    I thought Shona was a name xDD The poem was sweet . Cheesy, yet not at the same time . You never dissappoint, do you ? (:
    This was simply wonderful .
    ..__MiNDYY