Comments : Lover's Whispers

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    In our dreams we soared above the clouds,
    On a flying carpet made of gold,
    Together we flew into the future,
    And saw ourselves grow old, together,

    This was such a sweet and touching poem. To be honest I loved the whole thing, it has brought a smile to my day. True love conquers all.

    All the best

  • 16 years ago

    by timehealsallwounds6

    This is a really good poem i can see the uniqeness in it.. amazingg

    timehealsallwounds*

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Very beautiful poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sam
    This is so beautiful. Your love shines so bright :)

    Under the dazzling stars on our white night,
    I gave my love to you,
    For a minute you were silent,
    Then whispered back, I love you too.

    This stanza is so heartfelt.
    Wonderful poem of love.
    Take Care Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by CourtneyLouxxx

    Sweet and touching

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    Flowing, original venacular...well written and quite enjoyable.