Good job girl i really like this poem...

OMG...that was beautiful.. loved the ending,everything...

a very good write..keep it up

great job :D 5/5

~Wake~

I like it its realli cute =]] 5/5

Wow!!
Very cute poem..love the ending n it was a beautifully penned write!
Good job!
xxPoojaxx

"You give me a smile
Before your face fades away
And im just left with a
Blank blue sky"

This was such a beautiful and poignant write.
It seems the things we truly love, just slowly over time, begin to fade away. Great write :)

Take Care.

Great poem.
Beautiful piece of writing.
Really enjoyed reading it.
Take care