This is very lovely even tho it is sad...its horrible loosing someone you truely love...keep up the wonderful work, keep on smiling! =)

MickeysBabyGurl

"My heart skipped a beat whenever i seen your smile." =Saw your smile.

I found this to be incredibly sad, bittersweet and moving all rolled into one.

"I knew this was too good to be true,
my ugliness has finally shown through."

^^Those lines were amazing, so much melancholy and bitterness in that couplet, it really tugs at the reader's heartstrings.

The onlt thing I didn't like about this was that the I's weren't capatilized, but that's just me being picky.

Overall, you did a good job with this.