HMMM. THiS P0EM iS 0K.
BUT H0NESTLY, i DiDN`T REALLY UNDERSTAND THE MEANiNG BEHiND it && It ALS0 FELT LiKE THE P0EM WAS RUSHED. iT N0T THE BEST P0EM. i C0ULD SEE iT BEiNG EXPANDED iT A LiL`... KEEP UP THE W0RK. i`M SURE Y0U`LL iMPR0VE.

FEEL FREE T0 CHECK 0UT SUM 0F MY P0EMS WHEN U GET THE CHANCE. THANX. :)

I like this poem =]
i completely understand what you mean
well, at least i think so, anyways.

Really awsome poem, i liked how u described what u can do with each thing. 5/5 totally

=]

~tia