Comments : Slipping away- baby dont let go...

  • 16 years ago

    by V dog

    Im way new at this so this poem was just in my note book so i put it in and i dont know how to really explain this poem so i guess im just writing a comment to my self haha. this is about one of my friends. he came to my work and asked me to come out side, he had something to say. so i did and he ended up telling me he was saying goodbye...it suprised me so i asked him where he was going and he just said away for a while and i wouldnt see him for a while...then it hit me...he was going to kill himself....luckily i got him not to. I wish he knew how much people love him.

    I love you big guy!
    Love- v dog

  • 16 years ago

    by lisa

    Wow i see why u wrote me a comment you sort of went through the same thing atleast you could help him tho!gud on you!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by LossxOfxControl

    I'm so glad that you helped him, the poem is really nice and flowing too, thanks for the comment on mine.

    Good luck with stuff =]