This is really one of the best poems I've ever read. Your feelings really come out in it, and it's an extremely well-written piece. Keep up the great work.

~Ashley

Nice, really nice nat...
just one suggestion...scripting, inscription, and inscribing...three words are very alike...try synonyms and it might add perspective...unless ofcourse you intended the repetition...

I specially enjoyed the thirst for everlasting peace part...maybe cause I related to it...maybe cause we all do..