Comments : What has happened to me?

  • 16 years ago

    by Sydney

    Ohh I like this one XD. It seems to have some truth behind it. Rhyming was good and flow was nice. Overall it was great :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow.

    A very emotional piece...

    "We're mad with regret,
    With memories that we'll both forget.
    So far it's been so hard,
    To cover up these scars."

    ^ I love love love that stanza! Simply wonderful. The flow was flawless, the emotions were strong & clear, && the word usage was great. You're a fantastic writer, keep it up! 5.5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelsey

    This is a great poem 5/5