This was really sweeet and sad. I am sure that their in heaven.

Very good poem

This poem is good
but needs some structure
once thats fixed
it will be even better

Great job on this one! Although none of my family has died from cancer, one of my best friend's mom had breast cancer and died when he was 5. I hope you are able to pull through it and whats nice is that the person is no longer in any pain! God bless!
<3 Love and Trust <3