Huh, four sided wall very appropriate title, nice poem thanks for reading mine.

This was a goos poem Really like the title..

Note: "These little thinks,"
Shouldn't "thinks"be "things"?

Keep it up!!!

Josie

And what once was. = And what was once (switch was and once=])

swallow you whole= swallow ME whole

This poem was much better. Fairly accurate punctuation, and it was more hard hitting. The poem was easy to get into, although I found that the poem wasn't explanatory enough for my satisfaction. I did like the title, which was attractive, and your word use was simple but effective.

This poem was much better than the last one I read, but not the best. Still, well done. =]

5/5
~Stephen White