OhMyGosh!! This is amazing! I loved it. So much emotion was put into it, i could just feel it. I really liked the last stanza. Awesome work, so keep it up!! Xx Chrissie

Aww, i love this poem

Oh excellent i loved that.

Aw this was a nice poem
nicley written

Elequently said! Very nice write.

Oh christ!!!..so so beautiful....very good write.....simple n filled with lotsa emotions which made the poem look Great!...n the last stanza was Amazing!!.....

kp it up!

5/5:-)

xxPoojaxx

The flow was absoulty flawlessly perfect. I really loved that. The word choice was the best, and the emtion was clear. Great job 5/5

Wow......amazing!!! Really enjoyable read, with perfect rhymes, and perfect flow.....nothing else to say......just amazing!

I love it's flow, it's really easy to read, yet it has a deep message.