That was a great poem! No one shoud have to be afraid of their Dad! Your dad is there to protect you, not hurt you! But whats sad is that really does happen! thanks for your comment!
~Love and Trust~

I loved this piece, i really didn't see that ending coming so it surprised me and made it even better! i loved the poem itself and the story behind it, its heartbreaking but very well written...definitely 5/5 keep it up!
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I loved this poem so much. Thank you for commenting on mine!! I hope everything works out okay. for the baseball part i can understnad that happening.
~Singing in the Rain~

Yea i know wat you mean about sports i been into so many but i can realte with the fear it was nicely done
-->Darkest Angel<--