She was clam as death took her in his hands
No more pain, she is finally free
She was calm as death took her in his hands
Free from his haunting memory

^^Favourite satnza...lovely work...beautiful poem...vivid description n perfect choice of words adds beauty to this 1!!......kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

5/5 this is an amazing write. the repetition worked very well and your words were amazing. You created great imagry and the poem left a haunting feeling yet was so beautiful. excellent job.

This is just so wonderfully written...the imagery is so great and the flow so awesome...
it's just...wow
5/5
*isabel*

I like the whole scheme of things here. very interesting and cool :)

Oh, this poem was so nicely written so i had to go back and re read it, that was the time i find out it is not nice but a perfect poem which is written greatly. you are so talented and i like your works. they are great and you can feel it came from a hand of a great writer. keep it up....
a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.