This was a sweet little poem with such a beautiful hidden meaning
Just a word of advice, try to spell out the words properly as it puts people off when the grammer and spelling is shortened to 'text speak'.
Either that or put it in the slang catagory =)
*Gem*

Good one!!!

God bless u

This poem is really really good. Keep up the great work 5/5
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Good poem i like it

Sweet poem

This is a very sweet poem by you!
One word of advice: capitalize all you i's and there is a little mis-spell in the fifth sentece it should be "about you".
I trust you to change it and rate this poem a 5/5!

Best wishes,

Ingrid