"he told me there was no other
but he lied"

This was a really strong line, because it just goes to show that when you lie you end up getting caught out. In the end you've gotta ask yourself whether it is really worth it. Great poem

Take Care.

Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

This poem is deep and it speaks words that even the brain cant decifer...only the heart can do that. Your a truely inspiring writer.
Pc
Kat