Comments : When you said goodbye

  • 16 years ago

    by Silently He walks

    Insightful. The piece can relate to alot of people including myself. I like the way this is written it is different. over use of repitition but thats what makes this so unique. Good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by just a little bit hurt

    Gurl you no This poem is to depressing lol!