Funny poem, i like it the rhyming pattern, too. keep up the good work. 5/5

Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

I love the summary of the final line xD
Well done, very well done.

Lol..that was great...I liked it...really funny.

Hahha this is hilarious...good job =]

Totally loved it..

amberrrr

Loves ittt <3
it was totally funnyy

Thats funny

Ha ha ha nice funny piece with an amusing story. well written with gud rhymes. 5/5 ofcoz

My God, that was so funny!!

Haha poor thing...lol thats funny as hell! keep it up i like this one