Comments : Lonely

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    The feelings of sadness and depression are so aparent in these lines. Great job!

    Restless days and sleepless nights
    Crying and Trying to put up a fight.

    This is a very strong image.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by nai

    Another brill piece of poetry, i almost feel you pain.
    i do remember feelig like this...but never give up

  • 16 years ago

    by ruby

    Whoa dang!
    this is deep!
    i likeeee it! :]]

    5/5