Comments : Lies there dead.

  • 16 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    Woah I like this one

  • 16 years ago

    by Brook

    Wow, that sound like what my sister would do... That poem was so awesome!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenie

    Wow
    u have a lotta talent w/ these short words!
    5/5
    stay strong!!!
    im here

    Jenieo

  • 16 years ago

    by nai

    So powerful, i almost felt i there.
    i hope you dont feel like this though!
    great piece

  • 16 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    I luv it. Poetry is a graet way to express urself and this poem reminds me of me cuz i sumtimes(ok alot of times) feel like that.

  • 16 years ago

    by Matt

    Nice poem...it carrys a message I think most people here can relate too