I loved the title the most. it was excellent. thats wat i want. nice and inviting titles to really entice the reader. well done thru out this whole poem.

5/5 david

The imagery left me breathless, omg that was so amazing, it spoke to my soul and keep my attention all the way til the end, absoulty perfect, there is no way to improve on perfection. I love this really keep writting you are so talented. 5/5

Very nice poem. I loved the flow. It was a longer one but you made it work. 5/5

I loved thip oem too. You gave of more than one meaning so people can interpret it there own way. I lvoe how your poetry leaves your audience open to wonder.

xxx alex xxx

Your poems are absouletly amazing. This one speaks to me of the inner pains of yourself and how sometimes you just wish you were invisible to the rest of the world and that they would just leave you alone. You captured the emotion in this poem perfectly. The flow and rhyme and everything just made this poem wonderful. It was a wonderful write and a better read. I absoultely loved it! I honestly can't express how happy your comment on my poem made me and how much that meant. Thank you so much. 5/5 for sure.

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Brutally honest, babe.
Umm...
Lack of originality.
Flow was pretty slow.
Rhyming was really forced.

I didn't even finishe it.
I was just... bored with it.

Sorry.
I won't vote.
I'm probably going to vote this a 3.

I shall respect your decision.
If you DO want me to vote.
Say yes on a PM.
If no, I'll understand.

I really am sorry.