Your poems feel a little bit weird.
They're not what I'm used to reading from you.
Maybe it's because you always use
A certain type of format.
Lol.
But still
Your poems now are overwhelming.
Your words are all over.
Maybe you could erase some unnecessary words
For example:
Okay maybe not...
You're telling a story.
So it's kind of weird.
But maybe you could space it out?
Example:
I'm locked at the window,
my face is a blur;
I'm screaming at the world,
yet the wind's so loud that there's nothing anyone else can do;
I know it looks weird.
But right now.
It makes me NOT want to read your poem.
Sorry.
Still...
Although it was overwhelming to look it.
It is a wonderfully written piece.
5/5?

Aweh man! You made my poem with this title look like utter crap, lol. I love your descriptions and your imagery was great. There was one thing though, in the line .. "your very precious to me" 'your' should be 'you're' :]

5.5
<3

It's so powerful. Imagery was amazing. Enjoyed reading this. Unique because it's just overwhelming. Loved your layout also!
Keep up the amazing work! :)
5/5