Comments : Heartbeat

  • 16 years ago

    by HopefulxRomantic

    Very well done. A delectably heartfelt and indepth recitation on the subject. The flow of the piece is free but not unorthodox, and suggests a very open spirit with thoughts that hold no restriction in your conciousness.

    My deepest sympathies if you are deriving from truth for this poem.
    HxR