Though your flow is shaky and off, i still loved it. You had some really good lines in it. Here are a few i liked

thought i could mend the gap between love and hate.
but i don't wanna suffice 4 u.

great job!
*ME*

Absolutly amazing Good job.

It was good emotion...and i love then end
5/5
=]

Absoultly awseome. Although it was shaky at some parts the whole thing was awseome put together. Most people can relate

Thanks

Thanks

Really god poemm!!