Luanne,

This is such a romatic piece and has a very dreamy quality to it. Lovely, one melts into the flow of the words.

Warmest regards,

Steve

Luanne
Your poems are always so beautiful. Imagery is wonderful.

Take care
Love Cindy

This was a beautiful use of imagery to describe the act of making love. It brought so much romance to the forefront and really spoke of how women wish it to be and to feel. Speaking only for women that is....
What a superb write with such wonderful flow and imagery.
Great Job,
Kay

WOW that was a totally awesome poem of deep love a mind blower , I love it , great job it was short ,sweet and well expressed, keep up the good work , your friend Tracy