Ohhh, a sweet poem but if you read this poem so carefuly it has a deeper meaning from my prospective.
as always i love your poems no matter what style or what kind are they.
keep it up.
YOUR BIG FAN
Goran Rahim.

Hahaha lol...wonderful.,short but awsome. I giggled a lot. :D
5/5 frm my heart

Hehe how cute
sounds like it should be written 4 a child
nice work

Wow!!...such a cute poem...short..lol...it was really sweet poem...but it has so much depth if u taken from a different perspective..cute!lol
Good job!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

Hah hah.
Actually, an acquaintance of mine
Did a tripple limerick
And won a contest.
Maybe you should do the same.
Lucky for you, you don't need
As much luck as he does.

I don't understand this poem that much.
When you said chug.
I kind of pictured the beg getting eaten
For some reason.
Was I correct?