People may think that sick but i can really read past the words themselves..i really had to sit there and think about this one, which is a great thing to get someone to do, excellent work 5/5..

I agree, some may think that sick, but i saw some real meaning to it, 5/5

Wow... after reading the first two stanza's i had to stop and collect my thoughts..
But the hidden meanings are there if people care to look and how powerful they are..
Kudos m'dear.. You have an intense poem with the coveted shock factor
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

To tell the truth I actually dont see a meaning behind it but I have an idea of what it is, but I'm not sure about it. Hopefully its what I think it is. The imagery in this was good, I have the tendency(sp?) to always picture what I'm reading, dont really know if thats a good thing or not but anyways. It flowed pretty good.

"and you'll always relive you babies pains and cries."

your instead of you.

Keep writing!!

Wow what a great but very awkward poems, love the idea, and vivid imagery

You knwo there is alot being said in the poem.
i wouldnt write about babies in a microwave however;
but i liked it still

(i know alot of dead baby jokes so this didnt make me feel sick)

i love your work.
Star.

You=your; in the last sentence.
other than that you did an amazing job.
keep it up. <3

This poem had to make me think. it's a little disturbing but i think that's what makes it so good! you are a great writer...oh and thanks for commenting on my poem!

Interesting and disturbing....keep up the great writing

This was on the news couple years back, a woman put her baby in the microwave, I remember 'cause we all had to write something about it at school.

You captured it really well in every single line, the imagery is great.

Keep it up,
xxxxx

Sad poem but well said

Well its a good poem and I really don't see anything wired about it unless I am wired to but i don't think so LOL!

Omg wow that poem scared the shit outta me but i give it a 5/5 ill do that 2 someone who microwaved a kid lol