Wow you made me depressed, nice poem 5/5 perhaps you can read one of mine.

That was a really interesting piece, I liked the choppyness of it and the fact that it was so abrupt and blunt added to the depressive feel of it. Fantastic! I really hope this wasn't something you had to witness though.

Aw...connor this is fantastic.....

Great job connor! 5/5 very touching...lol