What a very moving and sad piece you have written. How wrong for a child to pay for the wrongs of the parents. Emotions are very deep and intense in this write.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

I can relate to this poem, its a hard subject to discuss but more people should speak up about it so that less children are abused. Sian xxx

How terrible.. it chills my blood to think that this still happens in this world..
You've written this so fluidly with the emotion packed firmly into every line..
Very vivid and heartbreaking, yet it showed a tinge of happiness with your own children..
Kudos m'dear
5/5
*Gem*

I thought this was amazing...very chilling...it really is something that i can realate with...i love it...good work

Love,
Brit