The second line on your first stanza really didn't make sense to me.
Lol.
Nitrogen and gin doesn't really rhyme that well.
But how you put it in a stanza, it makes them seem like a perfect couple.
Second stanza?
I can see the image clearly in my head.
Guy walking out the bathroom coughing
And girl doubting his lies.
But, he doesn't like this; you must make your decision now: "It's either or her or me."
Her or me?
Who is "her" exactly?
Is the man having an affair?
This was kind of confusing to me.
You didn't really explain all that much.
I don't know.
4/5?

You have a great style to your poetry. I love the way you take two lines from two different stanzas and then bring them together at the end. This one was great! As soon as I am done commenting, I am adding you to my favorites! I already added on of your poems to my favorites!Great job! :]

HOW IN THE DEVIL WAS THIS A 4.5?! That angers me, lol. I thought this was amazing, clearly some jealous readers disagree with me..obviously I'm jealous of your writing talents too, but I don't downvote because of it, lol. I loved this Darling, don't let that rating get you down, let it flatter you instead. :]

5.5
<3