Comments : Tell me why

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Tracy
    Very sad and heart wrenching to read. The emotions cry from your words. Great job on your poem.
    Thinking of you
    Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    "Tell me why"
    ^^^
    It is the questions to which we receive no answer that tears us up inside. As the context of your poem matched the title perfectly.
    Such a heart touching write.

    I love you, more than you'll ever know and have from the start
    said I was your one and only, then why are you braking my heart.
    ^^^^
    This couplet just tears at the heart strings!
    Though I think you meant breaking - braking

    Excellent read filled with emotion

    Take care
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by Skulblaka Sverda

    Yes I have felt that "ball" in the chest, that pit of anguise............

  • 16 years ago

    by WhYcAnTuLoVeMe

    Thanx 4 ur comment...i love writing, like pretty much everybody on this site writing is an excellent, and safe escape 4 me...
    This is really good work, all of it is..i wish i could write this good...5/5