Your poem is awesome just a bit too long people dont wanna read it if its so long try to shorten it but other wise its very good 5/5

Wow..........
this was one of the greatest poem i ever read in my life with great meaning, emotion, flow, and word choice. you have done a perfect job. so deeply written.
just a small correction if you dont mind, lila and majnoon are not lovers from maldive, i know their story is famous in pakistan, sri lanka, maldive and bangladish area but they were arabs from some where in middle east that im not sure exactly where, majnnon means crazy in arabic and he got that name for being crazy for layla, his original name is qays.
a perfect job once again. keep it up

Mohamed
You have poured so much emotion into this poem. It is coming straight from your heart. Those are the ones that mean the most. Exceelent job.
Take Care
Your friend Cindy

Wow!!!..beautiful poem...passion is brimming in the lines...n the emotions r filled in these words...wonderful write!
Excellently portrayed!!
5/5 u deserve it!!

xxPoojaxx

I really like iits long but very well written and i can tel you put you heart and time in to it great work really 5/5 =]]

-Left Eye

Wow... this is a really really really long one haha.... but its amazing. you have poured out so much emotion in this one. if i had such a long one as this i would call it my masterpiece as well. great job. very emotional. i love it.

Woah
that was only EXTREAMLY long lol
it was really good though
and didn't seem like that long
nice work

Wow..umm..incredibly long!!! It was good though. The only suggestion I have is for you to use punctuation..it helps with the flow..great job though hun, I'm sure you spent a lot of time on this one!!
Tyanna

Wow - that was really long and changed throughout, but it never stopped being awesome. i can see why u call it ur masterpiece - it must have taken a rlly long time 2 write!

This is the longest poem I have ever read in my life. I dnt think there r forced rhymes. Its filled with emotions. great

Wow this was so beautufully written, the emtion was powerful and the word choice was excellent. the flow was amazing Even though it is quite long, it was worth the read, and it kept my atention all the til the end. Excellent job 5/5

Wow it took me forever to read this but i am glad i took the time this is very powerful and full of passion much depth was put in this one i can tell in captured me right away and didn't let me go till the last word great write 5/5

It was good, a bit to long i think, but it was an ok poem. i just had to read every single word of it, it just got my attention, i loved it great work, 5/5

I have heard people saying
I have heard lovers crying
In love there is nothing to fight
In love it is always right

my fave lines ^^

Wow.even though is long.i enjoy reading it.you're such a great poet: )

This was a long poem and i think it could have used stanzas like smaller ones but this was well done an amazing write!

I think that the length only adds to it
i've felt this way about certain prople in my life so i also understand.
amazing peice
5++++++++

This is so amazing, i've never seen anything like this in my like WOW!