Oh, this was so heartbreaking to read...and yet written so beautifully and elegantly.
I loved the imagery you used in this, it creates very vivid pictures, flow was flawless throughout and the word choice is enjoyable.
I loved the ending, I thought it was very intense and hard hitting.

You gave me shivers, that was so powerful. i loved it!

Dang lol. This is an awesome poem. I mean it had so much scenery but my favorite part was the end. It was the part with the most shock lol.
-vino