Tracy
This piece is so full of paiin. I hope things get better for you soon.
Great job on releasing your emotions. Hope it helps.
Take Care Cindy

Tracy
This piece is so full of paiin. I hope things get better for you soon.
Great job on releasing your emotions. Hope it helps.
Take Care Cindy

Great job. It was short yet filled with emotions that made it a great poem. I like the way you described what's eating and taring you apart as 'the beast'. :)
cheers, josh

I think you're a great poet, so keep up the good work. i don't know if this is how you really feel, but it seems that you put your heart in it and that is what makes it great.

And yet another well written one! :-)