Ok, i guess you already know i LOVE this poem...
i don't exactly know why, but this poem is like amazing! it really got to me when i was first reading it, and i thought there was like so much emotion in it. after i read those first three lines, i already knew i was going to love it, and i was not dissappionted.
great job with this, it's really one of my absolute favorites on here!
I really hope you know that you have talent and that talent I hope you ever stop writing because you are really good.. it would be a wst eif you dtopped... good job and keep it up.. srry there isn't anything abiut the poem that I would change anyway .. good job once again 5/5