This was beautiful...I really enjoyed this.
I liked how you used time in the poem, it made it very effective.
Flow was good throughout the entire poem, and the ending was beautiful and elegant.

Wow!!!....beautiful beautiful work...the
"We live in the minutes and hours,
Of different days,
Never knowing how they past,
Just how they change us everyday"
I loved this stanza...specially the first 2 lines...n the flow was flawless...n i soo loved the ending.....
Great wrk!5/5!
xxPoojaxx

The theme in it was great! And it was so true. Great flow and just amazing poem! Keep up the great work!
5/5

I like this one! it had a wonderful flow, it was overall a beautiful piece! i LOVE the ending, it's totally the best part! great job!

You have a really gopod perspective and that is what tells who you are.. this poem is something I never thought of writing.. you have inspired me to write something that I never thought of writing before.. good job and yet keep up the amazing good work 5/5

Good write! god bless!