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WOW Ness... This is excellent girl i really like it GREAT JOB!!

Great job nesse i loved it

Omg! thats really sad. i love it 5/5

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Wonderful write, with great word choice. I loved the way this flowed and the emotion it had within.

The word, "didnt" in this line, "You didnt take them away" should be changed to, "didn't"

Also, I felt the poem would be stronger if you had puncuation through out.

Peace, Joe

Very nice write! keep up the good work!
good bless

Damn... You really got talent there aye! 10/10... Very moving... deep... and well written. Keep it up ;)

Great poem.I feel like you wrote a poem of my life.lol