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It was ok i did not like the repitition that you have used in you this poem. although it was good. but short. try to be agressive nexttime take care
your friend hassan
Very nice and beautiful , good work 5/5
I'll appreciate your rating and comment for my poems
I added u to my favorite poets .. ^_^
I thought it was pretty good.
It's good... but could have been better. Keep writing!
I thought this poem was written beatifully..It had alot of meaning it felt like...Nicely written...
by Arun Khan
Very simple, but very powerful.. great work..
i especially loved the ending.
by Shirani Graham
Its a beautiful and a nice job! well done dear.
by Rasheed Khokhar
by Mohsin Armaan
Please Never Stop Writing !
If u will Stop , we will lost Such a Good Poet!
Hey this was nice
for you its a 5.5
Well done :)