Comments : SEe ME!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    It was ok i did not like the repitition that you have used in you this poem. although it was good. but short. try to be agressive nexttime take care
    your friend hassan

  • 12 years ago

    by hani

    Very nice and beautiful , good work 5/5
    I'll appreciate your rating and comment for my poems

    I added u to my favorite poets .. ^_^
    Your sincerely
    Hani

  • 12 years ago

    by Alex

    I thought it was pretty good.

    ~*Alex*~

  • 12 years ago

    by Sourav

    It's good... but could have been better. Keep writing!

  • 12 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    I thought this poem was written beatifully..It had alot of meaning it felt like...Nicely written...

  • 12 years ago

    by Arun Khan

    Very simple, but very powerful.. great work..
    i especially loved the ending.

  • 12 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Its a beautiful and a nice job! well done dear.

    Nazeer

  • 12 years ago

    by Rasheed Khokhar

    Nice sharing....:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Mohsin Armaan

    Beautiful!
    Please Never Stop Writing !
    If u will Stop , we will lost Such a Good Poet!

    ~Keep Glowin~

  • 11 years ago

    by zaheer

    Hey this was nice

    for you its a 5.5

  • 11 years ago

    by Freedom

    Well done :)