It was ok i did not like the repitition that you have used in you this poem. although it was good. but short. try to be agressive nexttime take care
your friend hassan

Very nice and beautiful , good work 5/5
I'll appreciate your rating and comment for my poems

I added u to my favorite poets .. ^_^
Your sincerely
Hani

I thought it was pretty good.

~*Alex*~

It's good... but could have been better. Keep writing!

I thought this poem was written beatifully..It had alot of meaning it felt like...Nicely written...

Very simple, but very powerful.. great work..
i especially loved the ending.

Its a beautiful and a nice job! well done dear.

Nazeer

Nice sharing....:)

Beautiful!
Please Never Stop Writing !
If u will Stop , we will lost Such a Good Poet!

~Keep Glowin~

Hey this was nice

for you its a 5.5

Well done :)