Hi thanks for my comment, yes i did write it from a personaal experience. i just read yours its a very good poem, did u write this from a personnal experience?i enjoyed the end part as i like to know youve broke free from the control

Nice poem, its hard to rhyme and get the lines the right length with an acrostic. keep up the good work :)

I really like the simple flow ,and definetly the good choices of words... I really liked the ending.. it took me awhile to get what you were saying..but I was like ohh yeah .. lol sorry .. blonde momentlol well simply well done good job and keep up the good work 4/5