This was good, it had a good rhyme. But when you type, dont capitalize the first letter of every word, I used to do that and it wasnt all that good. Try putting commas(,) where they need to be, it'll make it better, with pauses and not just a long sentence. But overall it was good. Keep it up!

Hey ,, it's a great poem .. deep feelings and nice meaning .. keep it up :D

I liked it alot of emotion good job keep it up
~MELISSA~

Has he really done all these things or are they your fears