"don't know who to choose
don't know who to loose"

I think it should be 'lose'

Anyway, you've done a fab job in getting the frustration across to the reader in this poem
A situation many of us has been through
5/5
*Gem*

It sucks doesn't it to be in love with two. Ohh so confusing! I'm going through it right now. (5/5)