Very beautiful!!!

God bless u

Aww thats so cute. I like this poem because it's simple, short, and understandable. I hope the girl that you wrote this for, knows what a fine guy you are =)

This is good! I really like it! !5!

Very nice work.. I love it how it all flows..Lol

Good job . o great poem ... u used good words they gave it the real shape ..
keep it up .. t.c

Very nice poem, easy to read and understand but still has alot of feeling.
Thankyou for the comment on one of my newest poems
Love Hannah x

Lovely poem, i like it a lot!
simple, but very effective and well written.
thanks for the comment :D
Amy x

That is really sweet! I give you a 10/10.

I love it its a great oem and so true if ur lucky great job

Very nice...i liked it...

The smae goes for you. you are very good at writing poems.

I really like this one!!!

Nice poem

I love this poem!

Great job on this piece.

Love is feeling deep inside
a growing passion we cannot hide

Really liked these lines.
Take care Cindy

Thanks for the comment.
that's really good.
you write with a meaning. ♥

I thought this was beautiful.
Rather short, and yet filled with so much meaning.
Flow was good throughout, and the ending is beautifully summed up.

It's just perfect! Great job.

This is a beautiful poem. I really like it!

Aww that was beutiful xxx
Really nice
keep it up x