Some of your lines are pretty random.
They're not all that consistent.
At the very beginning of your poem,
You're talking about
Being hurt and ruined
Next thing you know
You're talking about a guy.
That's a humongous jump for me.
I thought it would be cliched.
Just because of your beiginning.
But somehow, you made it not be.
I don't know.
Maybe your usage of words?
Other than that.
It was alright.
It wasn't the best I've read in this whole
It also wasn't the worst.
And believe me.
I've read a lot worse than this.
Yea i felt like that when my ex broke up with me but you need to remember that everything happens for a reason and i guess that was supposed to happen...But i love the way you flowed with it and i just love the way you use your words in your writting 5/5