The 5th and last sections was my fave definatly a 5/5 i like your work :) xx

Wow, that would kill me if someone I loved did that mess....urrrr... This poem is great...5/5...I have poems too..

This is an outstanding poem! the emotion portrayed is clear and heartshattering. i dont think i could deal with that situation i'd probably completely fall apart and give up. anyways 5/5 amazing work!