THiS 0NE iS 0K. iT JUS` NEEDS T0 BE 0RGANiZED iN STANZAS && SUM STRUCTURE.

FEEL FREE T0 CUM & CHECK 0UT MY P0EMS WHEN U GET THE CHANCE. THANX. :)

Its alright...

Thanks for the comment i'll try to work on the stanzas and the structure