This is a good poem though to me it seem liked it ended too quickly. Great job though 5/5
-vino

I like this poem a lot because it shows how much you care for this girl. The flow was pretty good the whole way through, and the rhyming is written well. The only thing that I could suggest might be a more appealing title. But that's just a minor thing. Well done on this. =]

Much love,
Tammie xo

Absolutely loved it! lots of feeling

good job
Sarah