Well writen.... good work..
5/5

I like it, great thoughts and well expressed.

Very deep and true, I totally agree with the message of this poem. I really like it, you wrote it in a great way and picked good topic.
My favorite stanza is:
=The problem is clear, but dark as night.
We know what is wrong, but not what's right.
Mother protecting with sweet security.
Denial, ignorance, and what we see.=

The ending is also very effective.
Keep up!
5/5 from me