Luanne,

I am truly sorry to hear about your loss, but this poem is very beautifully penned and is indeed a lovely dedication. well done on trying out my form for you poem, you have done very well and the flow is very tight.

Warmest regards,

Steve

Luanne
What a beautiful poem. What a wonderful dedication. The poetry form is great.
Sorry for your lose. You and your family are in my prayers.
Thinking of you
Love Cindy

At this moment in time, i can relate to the feelings that this poem is portraying and it makes me want to break down and cry..
You've written such a beautiful tribute.
You're our very own angel in disguise Lu.
5/5
*Gem*

Awwwww such a sweet poem! i luv it! it wa so orignal, flowin perfectly and conveyin the lightness ov flight! keep it up! =)

"beautiful wings of tomorrow"

That is my favorite part...that line made the poem untouchable!!! WOW!!!

What a beautiful write. I have never read any of your work and said I didn't like it...you have a gift and you use it well!!! Damn good!!

And Dear Luanne, I am so sorry for your loss. I do pray that you and everyone else are ok today! God Bless!

WOW that was a beautifully written poem , straight from the heart with a lot of love, wonderful job and wording was great , love poems like that excellent job Luanne, keep it up. your friend Tracy d 5/5

Very beautiful poem :)

im sorry that i leave such crappy comments =\